I provide specialist, examiner-informed feedback on student drafts and extended responses across IGCSE and IBDP History and TOK.
Every submission receives detailed, practical guidance that identifies strengths, highlights areas for improvement, and explains what to consider or adjust before submitting final work. Examples are provided for further scaffolded support.
My services focus on providing feedback on student work. I don’t offer ongoing tutoring. My feedback helps students achieve the highest marks possible and develop independent, disciplined thinking aligned with IGCSE and IBDP assessment standards.
Services
IB History Examiner Essay Diagnostic
USD$100 per essay
- Written feedback aligned with assessment criteria and examiner expectations
- Identification of strenghts, areas for improvement and guidance on how to improve.
- Feedback on evaluation, analysis and judgement with scaffolded examples and support
- 48-72 hour turnaround
TOK Essay & Exhibition Diagnostic
USD$100 per written submission
- Guidance on object selection and commentary feedback
- Analysis of argument coherency and structure, including real world context
- Guidance on criterion alignment for the Exhibition and Essay
- Practical recommendations to strengthen final submissions
IGCSE History Draft Feedback
USD$120 per written submission
Includes full paper feedback for Paper 1, 2 and 4 (and coursework guidance):
- Essay structure and historical argument
- Source evaluation and analysis
- Explanation, judgement, and clarity of response
Examiner-Style Feedback Sessions
By Arrangement: USD$100 per hour
- Limited sessions during key assessment periods
- Focused, actionable feedback aligned with examiner expectations on essay or exhibition drafts
How Feedback Works
Students submit their work and I provide detailed feedback within 48–72 hours.
The feedback provided focuses on strengths, areas for improvement, and gives clear, practical guidance on what to consider or change before submission.
Optional follow-up consultations are available for discussion and planning.
Academic Integrity
All feedback provided is in strict accordance with IB and IGCSE academic integrity guidelines. I review student drafts, but I don’t rewrite them, and I don’t use predicted grades or confidential assessment materials.
My goal is to give students the insight and guidance they need to improve their own work, helping them to make informed adjustments before submitting their final essays or TOK exhibitions.
My approach ensures that students earn high marks through independent, disciplined thinking, while fully complying with assessment standards.
Payment and Submission
Once payment has been made I will begin reviewing the work and send feedback directly to students within 48-72 hours.
Here’s how it works:
Submit Draft
Complete the Contact Me form and attach your extended response, practice paper, essay, TOK commentary, or exhibition draft. Include any specific context or questions you’d like addressed.
Payment
After receiving your work, I’ll send you an invoice via email. Payments can be made via PayPal or Wise.
Receive Feedback
Once payment is confirmed, I’ll review your draft and provide detailed, actionable feedback within 48–72 hours. If required, you can schedule an optional follow-up separately at an additional cost.
Get In Touch
Submit your draft today to begin the process.